Classwork
I think the strengths of these illustrations are the line work and the colour mixing. I am also very happy with the garment illustration, especially the face.
I think the weaknesses of the illustrations are the dress didn't show up very well on the scanner because it was very light. It also looks as if it is a white dress with blue parts, not a fully blue dress.
I'd like feedback on the dress and my spheres.
Female Figure
I think the strengths of this illustration are the face and varied strokes
I think the weaknesses are the skin didn't show up very well on the scanner because it was very light. The dress does not completely show the drape of the garment.
I'd like feedback on the dress.
Male Figure
I think the strengths of this illustration are the hair and detailing
I think the weaknesses are the clarity of the individual garments
I'd like feedback on the garments
Process Work
I think the strengths of this illustration are the faces
I think the weaknesses are the proportions of the bodies
I'd like feedback on the proportions of the bodies
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