Classwork
I think the strengths of these illustrations are the line variations and use of grey tones. I am really proud of my Twiggy portrait as I usually struggle with faces and I think it turned out really well.
I think the weaknesses of the illustrations are the eyes are not the same size on the portrait
I'd like feedback on the stroke economy exercise and Twiggy portrait
Female Figure
I think the strengths of this illustration are the grey tones and varying line
I think the weaknesses are the face, I struggled to get the detail in as I did it A4 and so it smudged.
I'd like feedback on the line work.
Male Figure
I think the strength of this illustration is the texture created with a fan brush.
I think the weaknesses are the face as it smudged while I was working on it.
I'd like feedback on the texture and line use.
Process Work
I think the strengths of these illustrations is the blocks of the body.
I think the weaknesses are the smoothness of my lines and consistency with size of arms on the female figure.
I'd like feedback on both figures.
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